(My first attempt at Urdu Shairee! Somehow the emotions were'nt getting through in English!)
Yun
baras ye beet gaye
Kuch
sochtey kuch jaantey
Khwab
they ankhon main woh
Jo
neendh ke mehmaan they…
Hum
chal rahey they saath saath
Go
raastey anjaan they
Meree
bhi khwahishen thein kuch
Terey
bhi kuch armaan they…
Thein
muskurahaten bahot
Ansoo
bhi imtihaan ke
Umeed
ke sailaab main
Behtey
they kamraan se…
Kuch
zindagee ki luzzat
Kuch
husraton ki chahat
Kuch
jeet ki tamanna
Kuch
haar se bhaghawat…
Kis
kushmakush main they hum
Kis
bojh ko uthaye
Ke
parh na paye woh thukkun
Lambey
they jis ke saaye…
Uss
aik pal main jaisey
Har
baat ho gayee gumm
Na
roshni subah ki
Na
chandni qaba ki…
Woh
jisko hum ne chaha
Khwabon
ki chashni main
Duniya
wohi thee saari
Manzil
thee woh hamaree…
Kya
luzzaton ka mutlab
Kya
khwahishon ke maa’ni
Woh
raastey hamarey
Veeran
they bin tumharey…
Excellent Shama ji...... ap nay apnay khiyaalaat ,Jabaat o Ihsasaat ko jis piyaray andaaz main alfaaz ki laryioon main paroya hay ..... mai sirf itna hi kah sakta hon kay aap kay haan taza khiyaalaat and un choyay Jazbaat ki farawani hay .. and ap in future ap Azaad Nazam ki achi shayaraa sabit ho saktin hain...InshahAllah
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Arbaab Alam
Thank u so much Arbab Sahab. Yun to jazbaat kisi zubaan ke mohtaaj nahi, par kabhi kabhi zabaan apney asar se jazbon ki sachai ko nikhar deti hey. :)
ReplyDeletebilkul sahih kaha ap nay..aur ap nay jis tara ap nay khoobsorat , saada aur aam feham Alfaaz istimaal kiyay hain . is say ap kay jazboon ki sachayi, Lafzoon ki Hurmat aur Harfoon ki Qadar o Manzilat ka bakhoobi andaza ho raha hay ....Allah karay Zoor e Kalam aur Ziada ........
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